All Comments on 'Lori'

Very nice.

So glad you restored sex talk to the workplace. Men and women both miss this sort of thing. This story is so hot. You need to write about Phil and Lori having risky sex at work, Phil, Lori, and Tiff having a threesome, etc. It's in your court, buddy. I just made you a favorite, and can't wait to read your other stories.

Complete, but leaving plenty of room to go on with...

I loved this story. Would love for my hubby to arrange something like this with a hot gal...especially with another Lit writer...Brittni4u. 5 Stars.

Oh, you are such a tease. I find it interesting that you have so easily switched from your earlier stories to quick, fun ones like this. Love your work. Thanks for sharing.

Omg that was so sexy. I loved the story and as a beginning writer I think I learned something too.

I loved it. I can’t wait to read the next story. You have a new fan!