by Mericalovess
WOW! AWESOME STORY. A terrific story and an exciting read. Great plot & characters. Thanks for developing this amazing story and plot. I hope you choose to continue with many additional chapters. 5 Stars.
I really enjoyed how you described Mrs. Fisher (Val). Realistic that of a suburban mother in her forties. Very accurate The build up was great and the sex was done well. Nothing over the top, but worthy for a young man's first time. Well done.