All Comments on 'Lost Ch. 01'

Keep it up; keep him down!

Almost hypnotic; intensely tumescent and only the first piece of Lost. I’m hooked.

nice buildup of the excitement!! Love to have her ball busting him in future chapters.

Good boys always clean up their goo.

Looking forward to his journey as her submissive. Bravo!

He’s bored, not submissive. It was too fast, too easy and too…neatly packaged.

Here a man: Successful in business, a failure in relationships. Wealthy. Looks after himself. He isn’t going to start smoking just because a blonde gives him a cigarette. Not only does it stink, you pay to get lung cancer and you become addicted to it….not something he would do. Might as well start a heroin or meth addiction.

He has all the qualities attractive young women would go for so why pretend them at he’s a loser in love. He literally says he doesn’t want a relationship; but he’s bored.

Don’t make him to be an idiot at the same time.

Interesting premise.

Too short.

All buildup for future chapters.

Four stars.

Thank you for the start of a wonderful story line.

You know right where to grab a guy......

I love that she had him lick up his mess! Such a yummy treat and hopefully he can clean his mess from other fun places too!

Wow.....I wanna be lost too

Such a great start

Wow!! This is the first story I have read of yours! What a great start for a series. I can’t wait to read some of your other stories!!

Remarkable. Totally enjoyable. Thanks. I am looking forward to future chapters.

I agree with whackdoodle 100%. Just too automatic. How is he suddenly a super-sub? Good story idea but insta-sub hurts it.

I love this start. I agree with some others that it’s a bit fast but it’s extremely well written. I look forward to more. It’s difficult to balance a realistic story with something exciting and arousing to read. I’m more than willing to give up a little realism for a good female domination story.

as enticing as Bree herself, nice opening