All Comments on 'Lost Keys'

For the read.

trusting you will write a couple more chapters.........

WHAT A CROCK

What the fuck was that? I'll tell you what it was. It was the musings of a 27 year old virgin geek who couldn't get laid with a 1000 dollars sticking out of his pocket in a whore house.

No offense author.

HA Ha ha

Unphased = out of phase Unfazed = not bothered

creek = small river. creak = a wood on wood sound

That's just paragraph one. It gets worse, BUT not as bad as the MAGIC of putting your hand on a woman's waist (waste = trash, like some LW stories) and inducing instant sexual excitement and submission! Wow, lucky parking attendant (why not put your hand on a sexy Hollywood actress' waist, and quitting the parking career at Vera's?)

2*

And you didn't even supply the crackers.

Just think about how unrealistic it is, a grip on the wrist makes her almost cum. No signs of her even considering being unfaithful, she just turns into a slut.

Not long, not well thought out. Try again.

Little pisser was desperate to post his poorly written cuck story.