All Comments on 'Lost Luggage Ch. 03'

by nangaman

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Mmm

I'm loving it! Want to see more! You should have Jan fucking herself with a garden hose while the water is running. HOT!

nangamannangamanover 14 years agoAuthor
mmm nice idea!

I'll try to work the garden hose in. It's taking a while to write the next chapter - but it will be done soon i hope.

yonekhadvashyonekhadvashabout 14 years ago
We want more!

I liked the three chapters of "Lost Luggage". I would like to see a continuation to that story and perhaps, even a chapter dealing with Ajay's relations with his travel agent Kitty. Good plot and I liked especially the way you built the sexual tension up.

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