by nangaman
I'm loving it! Want to see more! You should have Jan fucking herself with a garden hose while the water is running. HOT!
I'll try to work the garden hose in. It's taking a while to write the next chapter - but it will be done soon i hope.
I liked the three chapters of "Lost Luggage". I would like to see a continuation to that story and perhaps, even a chapter dealing with Ajay's relations with his travel agent Kitty. Good plot and I liked especially the way you built the sexual tension up.