All Comments on 'Lost Souls & Dreamers Beach'

this concept! The erotic story, spreading sensual and sexual experiences from person to person...

The story being a warm lover... caressing the reader...

Thanks for sharing!

It took a little bit to figure what you were going for, but I liked it once I got there. The 1st vignette was a bit rough and way too short; the 2nd worked pretty well, but was again too short. I'd love too see what you could do with a full-length treatment of each of them.

Keep it up!