All Comments on 'Lost Time'

by RxWhip

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percy3 months ago

Good first story!

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AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I love lust and the description of how she was dressed was so sexy. My problem would be enjoying that first time in a toilet stall....she was too classy for that....in my mind.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Off to a good start. Keep writing.

ITakePicturesITakePictures2 months ago

Wonderful story. How about an encore in Tahiti?

HighBrowHighBrowabout 1 month ago

Praise God and pass the Theozine. Anybody seen the remote?

HighBrowHighBrowabout 1 month ago

Seriously, you are a very talented storyteller with great characterization and imagery. I will read as long as you write, deal?

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