All Comments on 'Louanna's Unexpected Threesome'

I was wondering how a story could possible get a low rating in this category. Now I understand.

Short but Sweet. Well written.

Please don’t write anymore. Quit while you’re losing.

Wow, failure to tag properly gets you the worst ratings of all time.

***warning: watersports ahead.***

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You waited that long INTO the story to post the warning? Warnings that are given after opening a story are bad enough, but to wait until there are only four paragraphs left is inane.

You kept writing "her Devin" or "her Michael" many times, wtf is that, is English a second language for you? Example: Finally her Devin seemed to be reaching his limit This story sucked and was painful to try to read. Give up writing and take up knitting or something.

That really sucked.......... please quit now...........

Water sports should have been a tag.