All Comments on 'Love'

by bamboomoon

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Crap

Couldn't you move to EC

RePhilRePhilover 10 years ago
It's refreshing to read about a women

Who is simply a life support system for her cunt with no other redeeming quality whatsoever and her WACC (Wimp Ass Castrated Cuckold) of a boyfriend. To the author very well written on the technical side but we readers score on plot and content so 1 star for the story and 5 for the writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
It's refreshing

We readers score on plot and content so 5 star for the story and 5 for the writing.

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 10 years ago
Interesting Fragment / Scene

Flash comment for a flash story. I would be interested if the author extends his concepts & plots. Color this intriguing but forgettable as it stands now.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
My 2 Cents

They aren't married, not engaged, not going steady, not cheating, no open relationship, no swinging SO why is it here?

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 10 years ago
Two Porn Stars In Love

Who gives a flying fuck?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Good idea

A flash story based on an interesting idea. The more interesting ideas are only hinted at; her testing his love for her when confronted with the stark reality of what she does for a living (knowing it and seeing it are two different things, conceivably). Kind of strange execution, imho. Strange imagery. Not quite erotic, maybe more romantic, sort of gross. Maybe not a LW story per se, but it's a big tent and I think it fits, given the handling of the themes. Gave it a 4.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
huh?

WTF?

By it's nature, a flash story is brief, missing detail and back story.

But this......this was a mess.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
no tale

dear diary my day today. not your diary, fooled me

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
And? And? And?

A flash story failure. Just not enough information. And he didn't ask her to marry him. Just be his "life companion". In other words - he wants to screw her until he gets tired of her than find a good woman to marry and bear his children.

WargamerWargamerover 2 years ago

Too stupid for words, a load of garbage. If u know anything about the world of porn you know this is utter BS.

Somebody tell poor Anastasia Knight’s soul she got it all wrong………

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