by bamboomoon
Who is simply a life support system for her cunt with no other redeeming quality whatsoever and her WACC (Wimp Ass Castrated Cuckold) of a boyfriend. To the author very well written on the technical side but we readers score on plot and content so 1 star for the story and 5 for the writing
We readers score on plot and content so 5 star for the story and 5 for the writing.
Flash comment for a flash story. I would be interested if the author extends his concepts & plots. Color this intriguing but forgettable as it stands now.
They aren't married, not engaged, not going steady, not cheating, no open relationship, no swinging SO why is it here?
A flash story based on an interesting idea. The more interesting ideas are only hinted at; her testing his love for her when confronted with the stark reality of what she does for a living (knowing it and seeing it are two different things, conceivably). Kind of strange execution, imho. Strange imagery. Not quite erotic, maybe more romantic, sort of gross. Maybe not a LW story per se, but it's a big tent and I think it fits, given the handling of the themes. Gave it a 4.
WTF?
By it's nature, a flash story is brief, missing detail and back story.
But this......this was a mess.
A flash story failure. Just not enough information. And he didn't ask her to marry him. Just be his "life companion". In other words - he wants to screw her until he gets tired of her than find a good woman to marry and bear his children.
Too stupid for words, a load of garbage. If u know anything about the world of porn you know this is utter BS.
Somebody tell poor Anastasia Knight’s soul she got it all wrong………