by RCPeterGabriel
An intriguing story. "Perfect speed, Jonathan, is being there." Chang, in Jonathan Livingston Seagull by Ruchard Bach.
I admit I had to look up a bunch of stuff to get all of it but wow! Good job!
An interesting take on time and life (lives?).
Your spell-checker didn't catch "rogue" for "rouge," nor "countenance" for "continence," but at least he didn't "wrap his arm around her waste," as has happened in many stories on this site.
A good mind-engaging tale.
Very powerful indeed. I liked it very much. I would love to read more like this. You did a great job definitely 5 stars.
Great story, I can only assume the amount of research that went into this. Quite a dedicated effort for a short story. It really ties the supernatural to our own scientific knowledge quite nicely though. Allowing an explanation for that which we have not yet found a scientific reason for ... yet.