All Comments on 'Love: A Story of Divine Interference'

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JuanTwoNoJuanTwoNoover 1 year ago

An intriguing story. "Perfect speed, Jonathan, is being there." Chang, in Jonathan Livingston Seagull by Ruchard Bach.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I admit I had to look up a bunch of stuff to get all of it but wow! Good job!

RJDinNYRJDinNYover 1 year ago

An interesting take on time and life (lives?).

Your spell-checker didn't catch "rogue" for "rouge," nor "countenance" for "continence," but at least he didn't "wrap his arm around her waste," as has happened in many stories on this site.

A good mind-engaging tale.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very thought provoking and an enjoyable read.

technofrog2002technofrog2002over 1 year ago

Very powerful indeed. I liked it very much. I would love to read more like this. You did a great job definitely 5 stars.

teedeedubteedeedubover 1 year ago

Nice story. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Beyond description. Twenty five stars!

TadDevoSrTadDevoSr6 months ago

Great story, I can only assume the amount of research that went into this. Quite a dedicated effort for a short story. It really ties the supernatural to our own scientific knowledge quite nicely though. Allowing an explanation for that which we have not yet found a scientific reason for ... yet.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Nice!

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