All Comments on 'Love and Fear at the Crossroads'

Just way to short. Could have been a really good long story.

Beautiful love story; believable/knowable characters. So well crafted; so much shared/felt in a short space. And a storyline so different from your longer, immersive “Luscious Leftovers”, yet both captivating in their own way; both about love. Newbie writer — doesn’t feel that way. Thanks for continuing to share.

Had potential, but didn't deliver. The characters were well-drawn, and the plot line was fairly well thought out. The big problem is that the arc of the story should have made the accident the pivotal point, but simply introduced it almost as a "by-the-way" moment. The accident, Jackie's recovery, and how the couple got through it should have been the major point of the plot. Good writing, but better luck next time.

This was very good but it felt over too quickly. That said, I admire the way you told the story, cutting directly to the aftermath of the accident and the main scene. So no complaints or requests for a sequel from me.