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Click hereShe was so close now, only seconds away. Brooklyn was tempted to delay the oncoming wave of her orgasm, but she had all day, there was no reason she couldn't try to do this again. Her imagination went further now, bringing images of Jennifer's lips pressing against her own. Ahhh, she moaned and pressed her head against the pillow as the biggest orgasm she'd ever experienced blossomed between her legs and made her core tingle.
"Oh my god," she spoke out loud as she exhaled.
Letting her arms fall to her sides, she laid there trying to catch her breath. 'What the fuck,' she asked herself, 'does this mean I'm gay?' she wondered, feeling a deep and terrifying chasm open up inside and threaten to swallow her. For the first time in her life Brooklyn allowed her to ponder the thought openly. She still had desires to be with a guy someday, and she found some of them handsome enough to consider being with them, but the thoughts of being with Jennifer provoked something powerful inside her. Sure Jennifer was older, but she had been nothing but kind to her. Could it hurt to let herself be closer to the beautiful redhead? Inhaling deeply, Brooklyn let Jennifer's sent fill her nose as her fingers began to touch her sensitive lower lips.
Meanwhile, an alert pinged Jennifer's phone for a second time, telling her that the camera she had in her room had been activated. Opening the surveillance app, she watched as a young, dark haired young woman sat laid on her bed and pushed her hand into her knickers. A wide smile pulled at the corners of her lips. She had been excited the first time the app had alerted her and she saw Brooklyn discover her little stash of personal toys. But she felt ecstatic as she watched the same young woman now pleasuring herself with one of them.
Jennifer put her phone back into her purse and knocked on her client's door. She would have time to watch the video later. It was time for her to go to work now.
Words matter...a little editing was in order here.
A food start though.
Well written and certainly well put together. I'm really looking forward to more of this story. Thank you!
Excellent character development ! If you had told me the story was four pages long with no sex in it....I would have passed quickly. Instead,I was disappointed when the story ended(and a VERY clever ending at that).
Bravo. continued success.
SSB
An enjoyable though totally implausible read but it's fiction so who cares if the story is a tad unbelievable. Having the older girl turn out to be a hooker was a twist that I did not see coming. I thought the character development was very good and I am looking forward to the next chapter.
It started so well, with an interesting concept and good character development. Then it suddenly went completely off the rails with a plot direction that didn’t fit with the rest of story. It made me go from being engaged in the story, to losing all interest.