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Author's Note: I find it easy to come up with story ideas, but I struggle with two things when I write: seductions and endings. I know this is Literotica, and most readers don't care if the woman just rips off her clothes and fucks the man after he smiles at her, but I care. In my life, I've only had that happen to me once. It usually takes several dates before I sleep with a woman. It took months to get the woman I married into bed.
The ending is even more of a problem, especially since I posted this story in the category 'Loving Wife's.' At the end of chapter 2, we don't know if Cathy yielded to John. Half of the readers here want to see horrible revenge inflicted on a cheating wife. Another group of readers wants to watch the wimpy husband eat the cum from his wife's black lover out of her defiled pussy. I don't like either type of ending. To be honest, I don't have any experience with a cheating wife. The woman who inspires my Jean fantasies has been faithful to me for over thirty years. I'm sure I would feel different about revenge if she ever cheated.
I have thought of a few endings for the story. They include happily ever after for Paul and Cathy after the virus miraculously disappears as well as John and Cathy fucking their brains out and getting her pregnant.
One ending I like is for John to ask Cathy for a screwdriver, which he uses to scrape away the layers of paint sealing the apartment window. After eight hours of hard work, he frees the window. In which case, we would find the rest of the videos pretty dull.
I'd like to hear from my readers. How do you want the story to end? Remember, it is just a fantasy.
- COMMENTS
Loejtcalmost 3 years agoIt's been almost a year since you posted this chapter and still no ending. I don't think you will score well keeping the story in the LW category.
Having read numerous LW stories, I would caution you that LW readers aren't big on fantasy. Fiction yes, but some reasonable level of believabiliy is expected. Secondly if there is any chance the Cathy's baby is black, divorce is likely the majority opinion. Thinking of having Paul raise John's baby is out of he question unless you don't mind a shit storm of criticism and a lot of 1's.
However, since you rarely post a LW story and there have been only 18 comments posted so far, it is unlikely that the typical LW reader will be aware of Chapter 3. So all in all when and if you finally end the story is probably immaterial.
My suggestion is to post Chapter 3 in the Interracial Love category if Cathy had sex with John. There's always room for another bbc fetish story. You know the typical "she becomes his sex toy, Paul dumps her and moves on, she ends up turning tricks, etc.
Anonymousover 3 years agoif are real man then i appreciate you writing otherwise i give you 1 star
NVDiceGuyover 3 years agoAnd that’s the other thing. How does him watching the video not make him call her up and say what the fuck happened
NVDiceGuyover 3 years agoSo I like the story although very drawn out and a bit over dramatic. What I take exception to is you relived everything from Chapter 1 in Chapter 2. Makes me like like I wasted my time reading the first chapter.
A vote here for her succumbing the the dark beast and taking multiple loads of his black seed. Now the dilemma becomes who’s baby is it and can their destroyed trust last the 9 long months to discover chocolate or vanilla
