All Comments on 'Love, Beneath the Lyrics'

Not bad at all. i did get tired of Rose and Tony constantly asking each other: "Are you OK?". And the long meditations where something was about to happen and the author goes on a long analysis of what they're thinking. Sentence after sentence while the reader is anxiously waiting for something to happen. A five page story with only three pages really necessary. All readers know that they're going to be a couple, but it's how you get there that makes the story. This one took too long. A 4* or better rated only 3* for the tedious mental analysis we were subjected to.

I really enjoyed your writing style in this tale but I did get confused with the timeline of his hits. Before or after the beginning of this story? The fast track to hits sounds good in fantasy but leaves this reader lacking.

Thanks so much for writing this and sharing it with us!