All Comments on 'Love Beyond All Bounds Ch. 09'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
love it

Please please keep this series going. This is a really good series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
You fucked up.

You say she's never done a 69 bu5 in a previous chapter she goes down on her mother.you should keep better track of your plot lines.

FinalStandFinalStandover 6 years agoAuthor
Anonymous ...

... normally I'm good with people pointing out my screw ups, I'm not sure I made one in this case. April has done cunnilingus, but not a full '69' ~ as far as I can recall from this story to date. If I am mistaken, I apologize.

James aka FinalStand

Foxterot7aFoxterot7a11 months ago

The conversation between April and Damien is probably one of the most sensenual, sexual and emotionaly charged conversations I have ever read. Their complete honesty, adoration and passion for each other was beyond tender and refreshing. This was beautiful. As a romantic, I could realistic envision such a conversation. If I could rate this chapter 6 stars I would.

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