All Comments on 'Love Bites Ch. 01-06'

I think you are off to a great start. I hope you continue with this story, because I'm interested in following it. My only complaint would be the length of the chapters. I'd like to see them a little longer. Again, I think you have created a great storyline, one I wish to follow.

This story needs to be edited. All those names that are so like one another... In my opinion it is very hard to know just which caracter is speaking and about whom...

good stuff, i agree with the similar name's comment though, can get somewhat muddled, the story has promise though, keep it up ^^

keep going!!!!

I have deided to change the names or rather the spellings. Andrey is now Andre and Andreyah is now Andrea. Also, I'm going too stary using Alecsander's full name because i see how similar Alec and Aleca is.

Fuck, you need an editor!

A decent story plot,,,but do you spell names the way they sound or the way they really are ment to be spelled??If you spell them the way they sound,,that explains why they look so strange,Your off to a decent start,,,but please get someone to edit,proof read,,,something,,,Its hard to tell who is talking,it just jumps around,,,will keep reading,,,and hope you get a helper...