All Comments on 'Love Bites Ch. 02'

by Lioness_Queen

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deetimesdeetimesabout 14 years ago
MORE!

Please give us more... I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

jadeanise21jadeanise21about 14 years ago
more

I'm in love you must write more. hurry hurry hurry please please please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
More and soon

Please write more and quickly.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Loving it

please write more, the more i read the better it gets. continue please!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Love it!

I love it! Great story so far! Cant wait to see what happens next! Please more and soon! Thanks!!

spearman1spearman1about 14 years ago
Wow!!

Of course your gonna have to do Andrey's story if you don't include it into this one !! Your rockin' this story out!! Excellent starts! Keep up the great work!

catman71catman71about 14 years ago
MORE PLEASE

GREAT TWINS AS MATES TO TWINS OH HOW THE FUN IS ABOUT TO BEGIN

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
hooked!!!

cant wait for the next update!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
so happy

finally someone that can wrote a wonderfully love story that have more then just sex in it

puddlepaltoopuddlepaltooabout 14 years ago
Getting Better All The Time

Please keep it coming. The way to avoid all the your names starting with the same letter is to have a name reference site bookmarked and keep a running list in one of your word programs, like notepad. This has always helped me. You can also just make a list in a notebook.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Great story

Thanks for a great update. Why can't she shift into a were? Why is she called a lioness if she is a were?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
oh my oh my

i love this.... your story has a nice flow and great people so far plz keep writing

jadeanise21jadeanise21about 14 years ago
when will there be more?

i really like this story and can see that it is headed somewhere good. when will you be writing more? i ope there will be more chapters to this story. keep up the good work.

canndcanndalmost 14 years ago

so I guess aleca is andrey's mate. keeping it in the family huh! It was cute how easily she accepted him. I look forward to you playing it all out as her friend and brother seem to think she is special even though she thinks she is defective. I'd love to see a bit of longer chapters. I like your choice of changing points of view. It works nicely.

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