All Comments on 'Love Bites Ch. 03'

roll on chap 4!!!

i like the story, but if your gonna wait so long to put out a new chapter at least make it long enough to be worth reading.

You have all the elements there, but perhaps an editor is needed. Granted all the "A" names is a bit much especially given all the different spellings. However, it gets a bit choppy in trying to enjoy the story as well. Hence an editor would be helpful, someone to help smooth out the rough patches.

You should keep going. I hope Ch 4 doesn't cause you such a block. Good luck! I look forward to you revealing more of the story.

keep writing!!!

like the story and hope it continues but with two atleast and maybe more story lines going at the same time its going to get a little busy to read, maybe break up the sections more

I'm realy enjoying this. One critasism however: your chapters are way too short.

the funny thing is that all my friends tell me that the chapters should be longer, i agree but sometimes the chapter cant go on. i am truly sorry; i think im going to start combining chapter into 1 post so i wont disapoint you guys anymore.

I like t but it needs to be longer & needs to get erotic.

I like it too but it needs to get finished, as it is now I feel just everything is UNFINISHED and there are far too many stories that are not finished even after a couple of years....

I know others have said it needs more erotica but it's a nice coming of age story, I'm sure you will expand and make it hot.

Its so addicting I gotta have more chapters, lol I love it

I love this story. Are you going to update it? I hope so I find myself awaiting for the rest. Please hurry and upload more.

I'd like to know about the society they are in. There are weres and vamps and obiviously humans as she thought he was one. But are supernaturals common in this society. seems like there are lots of them. are the humans in the school the minority? I liked your using andrey teaching alec to teach us...

I like the gifts you've given them.