All Comments on 'Love Bites Ch. 09'

I've been reading the series and I'm still confused. Just hard to follow along.

Cant wait for the next chapter :) however I disagree with the other comment it's quite easy to follow if u pay close attention :D great job would love longer chapters though

Hey, I'm glad you got back to the story. It has been a while! I see what the one person was saying about the names. I think the cast having all 'A' names makes it a tad confusing when you added it to your putting nicknames once or twice at the headings. Just keep it uniform in the headings that you show the change of speaker in. The story has picked up nicely and it seems like it will begin to get very interesting and leave the same old 'found my soulmate' part of the story. I look forward to seeing where you go from here. Say hi when you get a chance.

Its not a chapter,its a page,,,but your getting so much better,,,still a bit confusing at times,,,but enjoyable to read,,hope the next page is posted soon...