All Comments on 'Love Comes Second Ch. 03'

Glad you updated hope for more soon

You are a good writer, as you managed to make me feel all kinds of things about this story :D. I am so mad with the prince for being so thoughtless and selfish, what an idiot, he doesn't even realize that sex would be more enjoyable for him if he managed to actually get her wet... And she is a bit of an idiot too to say that she enjoys anything like that. So you make the characters come alive :)

Your writing is good except, do not retell the story from both people, it’s boring!

Waiting for the next chapter :) Please update soon.

I got some anonymous feedback over email and I wanted to say that I'm sorry it has been taking so long to get my stories out there. I've been in school and working on top of that so I have a place to live, so writing all the time isn't easy. I have an editor working on the fourth chapter, so it shouldn't be long before it's up. As far as how many chapters I'm planning on writing, I have no idea. I'm just seeing where it goes :)

Good, she's sharing with Mary but why not with her husband?

She should get a dildo and fuck in her husband's ass with the same courtesy he bestowed her with, and then ignoring his sobs and tears and blood and cries to stop, thinking he is enjoying all of it. But this is not one of those stories, it is a 'be happy that you're being beaten' story.

Came back upon this story and thought to read another chapter just to see if as distasteful as remembered. Two disgusting characters: a hateful asshole husband and a simpering abused wife. Plot suggestion: she should go to the kitchen, find a butcherknife, and the next time he wants to enjoy himself on her — cut off his dick. Should alter his life perspective. 🤬

I'll never understand people who read nonconsent stories and then whine in comments about the stories being just that.

Hope you ignore those people, author.