by KellyRandom
Really should have scored this more than a three - 3 - because it is well written.
Despite having tolerated the restrictions of covid-19 'hibernation' I related well with the circumstances.
This is amazing, more erotic and intimate than anything I have ever written, or read, before. Your descriptions of lovemaking are made even more intense by your deft handling of the ambience. I have learned more about writing erotica from this short piece than from my 20 years of practicing and trying to perfect my own