All Comments on 'Love Letter Ch. 02'

by LilMami07

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LoneStarRiderLoneStarRideralmost 13 years ago
Outstanding.

Different circumstances, but "been there, done that". Heartbreak is tough.

Looking forward to ch#03.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
*****

Five.

honeybreehoneybreealmost 13 years ago
What an emotional rollercoaster between these two...

I hope Brian does the right thing and Giselle seem so mature beyond her years that she missed her childhood and teen years of fun. Wanting to root for both of them but something says they both need to grow up seperately rather than together at this point

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
soo good,like it

v3

mariasmdmariasmdalmost 13 years ago
soo good I almost cried...

damn. brian needs to man up! if brian is finishing college than, that means giselle is just starting. poor girl.well done, but way too short. I wonder what ashley would make of her brother and best friend about this??

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
can i?

can i do the voodoo thing toward Brian to get lost from the universe please? Or like your idea, strap him to mars hehe - n

NightpleasureNightpleasurealmost 13 years ago

ok. this is just too short but so good. next chapter please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Ohhh, okay...

So THIS is what it feels like to become engrossed in a story only to be left wanting more! Get to writing, Mami...I wanna see where this goes!

erin1955erin1955almost 13 years ago
5 stars,as you knew that !!!!

its bloody good woman,the only thing is that it is too short ! you cant leave us pining like idiots here.x

SashasworldSashasworldover 12 years ago
well damn!

great story but I do really wish you'd finish it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
omfg

Brian is such a fucking dick if i was her i'd cut him.That just shows how good your writing is if your characters are so believable that i can feel this strong of an emotion towards them.Keep writing and finish this mini series series A.S.A.P. PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

brownskinnedcutiebrownskinnedcutiealmost 10 years ago
How old was Giselle when they first had sex?

Giselle is a little playing at being an adult and she has too much because her momma works to many hours trying to8 keep a roof over their heads. Brian bettee step up to the plate..

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