All Comments on 'Love, Lust and Marriage Pt. 02'

Very nice complement to your first piece; retains a touch of humor while revealing more of Sophie’s personality and developing Louise’s character. Almost poignant as she feels/understands Louise’s anxiety and shares intimacy. Yes, sex in a hospital bed with others “sleeping”, but you didn’t opt for hilarious romp, rather made it feel intimate and erotic at the same time. You are a talented writer; thanks for sharing your vivid imagination. I am hooked on Sophie and Alice. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Opps just posted a compliment while confusing Sophie and Alice. Got wrapped in the scene. 😳😊