by Kassiana
Your writing has a nice flow to it, very elegant you might say. I'm impressed!
It was certainly worth suspending disbelief during the woman's rather unlikely humiliation to reach the final twist.
Its rare to see a story so intellectually composed. Cheers!
Nothing unusual. Do you remember your very first substantial orgasm. Did you ever say "stop" how about "that feels good, don't stop". And a bunch of "OH's" "AU's" "UM's" I bet.