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All Comments on 'Love Said, "Hello." Pt. 03 - Final'

by ajroye

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oldsage_1oldsage_16 months ago

What a wonderful tail. Yes each section is quite long but well worth the read. Thank you so much for sharing your fantasy(s) and gifted talent.

Cheers

SAGE

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Good story, but some of the writing was a bit repetitive. I also would have been happier without the supernatural parts. The relationship between the two main characters was strong enough without it. 4* (4.5, if I could....)

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Repetitive words like slurred. Too much dirty fucking, no lovemaking. Doesnt fit the rest of the love story.

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