All Comments on 'Love, Sex, Revenge Pt. 03 - Pain BTB'

A lot of men wish they can do what this guy did but don’t, so men just try to forgive but never forget that their stupid wife’s make stupid choices because they love attention, women you sluts are evil and selfish

A great story One of your best Too often you lead to a sense of confusion with your endings NOW I will read of you Best wishes (jaybee186)

Awesome revenge on that Archer asshole. The dipshit had the full to think he was humiliated for hitting on and trying to have sex with a married woman, then cruely goes about blackmailing and forcing her. All while he has an unknowing family. That is everything he deserves, last fleeting thoughts of how fucked we was. 5

Harsh I do not have a problem at with terminal vengeance but I don't think a cheating wife reaches that point. Hurt a child , pedophiles . Drug dealers yeah kill them all but just throw the cheating bitch out and move on. Just the thoughts of a old man but a whore just is not worth it. Thanks

Scary ,but in a good way

Glad the pay back was painful

Nice preface about that this can and does happen. I've been doubted and sneered at by naive commenters on other stories that don't believe things like this never happen. Count me also as one who has seen the other side and actually this was more of a mild revenge. At least in this one Archer went quickly. It could have been much, much worst for him.

Archer was a low life and I’m sure he would have continued his blackmail. You can bet that when he tired of that, he would have released the pictures. He chose the wrong guy to fuck with, choices- consequences.

Well written, you’re improving with each story.

Although the revenge on Aechers family never happened, it did happen in Archers mind. Too bad he died sosoon after "knowing" their alleged fate. I would have kept him alive and fed him bullshit about their "training". inflicting as much mental anguish/torure as i could . He would be told of their gangbangs, bi and homo sexual, trains pulled and such until he prayed for his and their death. I did not enjoy part one of your story, but you redeemed yourself here.

Well, Grace getting raped in every way possible for hours was messed up. I wish she would have thought fast enough to text her husband or record the conversation and send it to her husband in time to save her or spare her the worst of the hours long sexual assault.

I don't understand why he made her sit by her rapist or scare her after her ordeal and that was really confusing.

Killing Archer only made sense.

Thanks for the story!

This must have been close to their line. I'm surprised it wasn't rejected (as some of mine have been). That said, the guy deserved all of it. Good job. D

I rarely say to a writer that their work should be longer but that is the case with this. I think this could have been a much more enjoyable piece if your characters had been flashed out. As it stands, they are all underdeveloped underdeveloped and really really two dimensional.

That was a fiery BtB! The mind games on Archer before he died was a nice touch.

Your series was at best 3 stars overall,

However, your ending was unique and enhanced the story as a whole. While I enjoyed the series, your ending was a real good read for me.

Your writing on all of your stories to me has been quite good with a flow that matches some of the better writers on literotica.

Continue to write you have interesting perspectives in your stories.

Now that is a dark ending! Why, after all that Jonny said to her, would she keep quiet about the lunch, let alone the blackmail? Unfortunately for her, she was partly responsible for the death of Archer. How could anyone live with that knowledge for any length of time?

I must have missed how he burned the bitch

Grace just got off easy but she did witness how brutal her husband will be if pissed off.

Why did Grace gave her ass anyways? She just could have told Johnny what Archer did and begged his forgiveness without ever giving Archer herself. Because of that, it left a bad taste on me Grace finally fulfilled her longing to have sex with Archer.

Johnny, therefore, is a cuck.

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Though murder is not my cup of tea I do think this was done well, CindyTV is one good writer.

This was quite different from other LW in a macabre way.

Thanks for taking care of business. Really liked the way you handled both of them. Not sure I wouldn't have pushed her in also. But thats your way if handling the problem. Good story

I was worried at first about the extreme punishment for Archer but then thought about how I would feel if some scumbag took my wife. 'All is fair in love and war', kind of states it succinctly.

Wow Cindy you have a dark side, great story was wondering where u were gonna go with this, awesome job

A good read. Brutal payback, deserved.

I'm sure there are people who think this story could not be true and no one could be this vindictive. I grew up in an area where there were many strip mines for coal extraction and there are the remains of men at the bottom of these strip mine spoil banks, never to be found and missing persons investigations never coming to a conclusion. Messing around with other men's wives is a very dangerous endeavor.

Great story brutal ending. But yes, Archer got what he deserved. Grace should’ve been punished as well for not telling her loving husband about Archer’s blackmail. She did the wrong thing by giving in. That word, eh, trust, where was her trust?

She is luckier than what she deserves.

Scores 5/5

I didn't read the other chapters, so why is this big, obviously mob connected, bad man going out in public dressed as a woman? The revenge on Archer is brutal and deserved, and will firmly cement in Grace's mind the consequences of another dalliance with another man.

I normally would never score a story with a husband who is a faggoty cross-dresser well (And, don't bother arguing, only psychologically deranged men like to dress up like women. Moreover, being homicidal is not evidence of "manliness", at least in this case. The MC is written as having a fortune, the right business, and "minions" to help him. That makes exacting revenge rather easy. ). Nevertheless, the plot is creative. In fact, as much as I don't like the story, it's your best plot and best writing. Unlike your other stories, which have pedestrian plots, this one shows a lot of potential. Keep writing. 5

Every predator who preys on married women need to help cement the foundations of nee buildings coming up! What better way then to build a new future?

Over the top. Now he has a scared wife. Who knows he owns her life on this earth.

I am not at all into the cross dressing genre but you made it interesting and more understandable to a 74 year old straight guy. While I haven't read all of your work I have enjoyed what I have read. Five stars for this story.

Finally somebody got it right. You need to write a proper ending to February sucks, marc deserves a similar treatment, but worse.

Just went crazy. Killing is going to far. Up to that point I was pretty much for it. Grace pushing to go out what would you expect.

Good Job! Poor Archer, NOT!! I am disappointed that no further mention was made if Johnny/Jenny ever surfaced in their lives.

Liked it but wife's epiphany seemed phony. He would be crazy to trust her again, especially since she knows he is a killer. He now has to worry not only about her cheating but also about her killing him proactively!

Dark, but I liked it

Nicely done Cindy... I hope we see more of the sociopath Johnny/Jenny!

Dark and a little over the top, but I liked it... I'm sure more husbands in the same circumstance would like to be able to do the same thing... There should be more buildings with assholes like Archer!

As you said a little over the top but not as far over as you indicated. All in all a very well written well constructed story, keep up the good work it is very refreshing

Strong finish - I like the way the ending pulled together - 5* for this chapter.

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At minimum, Grace should be given her walking papers with a warning that there are plenty of other construction sites.

Wow just wow true.

True justice and true love old school so many cheaters holding up buildings and motorways .

Excellent Story: I'm 80 years of age and married to my second wife.

ex-wife (wife#1) did a lot of unacceptable things to me. I divorced her...

Two years ago via reliable testimony ex wife #1 related that she didn't know for

sure who the father of my SON was. She said it was to close to call.

Her testimony also reveled whom the other sperm donor WAS.

This other sperm donor and his wife are now passed away from natural causes.

ex-wife needs to learn how to do concrete work. I don't have the resources !!!

My daughter by ex-wife would not understand that or where her Mom disappeared.

OH well - guess will let this slide as a lot of bad things happened to ex-wife over many

many Years.. YES this type story does happen for real Dam; I don't have a construction company.

AU REVOIR

Brilliant story but I thinnest did not like the dress-up bit. A but too far fetched for me. Full marks for you spin a very good yarn! 5-Stars!

The best revenge on one’s tormentors is silencio, rendering the antagonists incommunicado. TOTALLY AND EVERMORE ON EARTH. Wife did deserve slightly better than ASSCHEWER. She is part of my new home’s foundation. Did not have quite the stomach to inter her into the septic system.

No one should have to,be,schooled,on one harsh reality: revenge such as this is more common than one might expect. Forget films and fiction. The harsh reality is that there are those who perform retribution on those who ‘poke the bear.’ Personally, I have rained terror on those who have crossed me. Their stories will never be told. That said, there are those who do what I do against others for no reason at all. Don’t bother me, and no harm results. Fear those who are indiscriminate in such behavior. Protect yourselves and loved ones, and live a fulfilling life.

God bless.

loved it

Don't fuck with the Mafia.

The wife deserved payback for screwing archer to save her own ass . Bull to that … throw her in the pit for Cucking Johnny!

The story ended on a good note. Story was also well constructed. The dress up just made me think Johnny spiced up his relationship with Grace. People might be surprised the men who lie silk next to their skin or like trying on women’s shoes. There's a lot of pricks like Archer in the world. Not saying every one of them deserve "concrete shoes", however most all of them deserved to suffer. BTRH...

I think the wifes punishment is to spend the rest of her life knowing she had a hand in killing her lover boy and also the consequences of what would happen if she did it again. Great BTB story

Slutty wife should be divorced

I haven’t ever known a woman on this site to be so brutal…I love it one hundred percent. I’m still waiting for someone to use my example of ultimate revenge (you came close) but to bury them alive with…inside the casket to torment them until their last breath would be my dark revenge on a sucker. But the Spirit forbade me to let it out. Now I have to go delete that part. I sorry but some dark mind might come up with it…good lawd CindyTV you are a beast..I shall go read the rest of your mayhem stories 😂😂😂 oh I skipped the cross dressing chapter…I sure thought wifey was going down to. But then again I thought you were bluffing lol

First of all great story. Very enjoyable read. Second WTF is with all the hate for Grace, in the comments? She was raped while trying to protect her husband. Should she have immediately informed Jonny of Archer's blackmail? Yes! But she made an understandable mistake in a bad situation. She subjected herself to an unpleasant afternoon where she was raped and sodomized to save Jonny from embarrassment and potentially murdered himself. How weak are all you anonymous commenters that say "she had another penis in her, she obviously need to be murdered?" How do you read the context and still come to that conclusion?

Again CindyTV wonderful story hope to see many more.

Best to be away from Grace, next time she feel less than sexy she'll do it again. Probably get off on thinking she can get fucked to scratch that itch and then the godlike feeling of letting Johnny know and causing the death of another cheating asshole. Johnny should have just pushed the source of all his troubles into the hole with her boyfriend.

Thanks for the great story. Please keep up the good work

great story could not put it down wish their were more.

What a story! She acted stupidly with a lunch date but that’s far from a fatal mistake. The afternoon rape was again just to protect Johnny.

I think tying them together in the limousine was beyond what Johnny should have done to a woman he professed to love.

Excellent tale, way above what I could write. Good job!

Bill S.

On all three stories together, you had me wrapped up. I was spellbound. I liked the little tough guy part, I can identify with that. I’m from a NYC neighborhood and grew up with that. The idea of the cross dressing was totally awesome. Unexpected for a wise guy. But I understand where the thrill comes from. It made the read that much more exciting. I’m going to read the rest of your works and comment individually on them. You are very talented. One thing.. Where did she buy the wolford pantyhose?

I gave it a 5. But I really believed he should have buried wifey there too. She took away any self respect her husband had for her, when she agreed to become Archer’s whore. I don’t believe her intentions, were all. that honorable.

There are enough revenge stories to explain this one. If people object, think of what you would do if someone stole the love of your life.

Good job.

Nice touch on the mental anguish. THANK YOU for a fun read!!!

Crushed it!

A very good read.

Dam,awesome story.I really enjoyed it.I believe you could length it and it would make a great movie,I would like to pick the actors for it.

So many different aspects of this story. Compare and contrasting behavior with Johnny and Jenny make a real compelling theme. My first thoughts on this were it makes sense that he had both M & F tendencies. Being raised with so many sisters. My second thought was it was interesting how Grace related to each of them. God help Grace if she strays again however her behavior indicated that she enjoyed both behaviors. Lastly your writing style and talents makes subjects I normally have no interest in, become alive with an edge that keeps my read and wanting to discover how the prick will actually be punished.. Nationalistically, I have come up with the next phase of Grace's and J/J life. Kids would be an interesting dichotomy. Thank you.

Thanks for your writing.

Nice one!

Great Story!! Loved It!!

Although I did like the story, I feel that part 2 wasn't the best plot device to use. I also think that the " cum in all of her holes " bit is overused and overrated. Simply taking his Wife once would have been enough and would have sent Johnny into action. Still, a 4 ⭐ rating.

Parts 1 & 3 of the story were topnotch. Great tale. I didn't read part 2 as i don't like cross dressing etc. LP

Holy Moly, Great Writing, Great Story (except chp#2) I loved your style! 5 stars! I love a happy ending. I am amazed at the "HATE" for this poor wife! She is ONLY human guys, humans make mistakes! Give her a Brake, she was Raped vaginally and anay. It wasn't her idea of a fun afternoon. Sure, she should have just told hubby, but she really didn't know what a badass her husband was. Now, and in the future, she has a much more clear idea that he is not to be fucked with. She just saw the man that she enjoyed flirting with thrown into a pit half filled with concrete and more poured on top. Great Way to take care of her rapist.

worked for me.

Great Writing, Great Story! Don't fuck with Johnny or you will be buried in wet concrete! 5 stars for a happy ending! I love a happy ending. This is a Great "Life Lesson" that you just don't know who you are messing with. When You make it you goal in life to fuck with Married Women, you just don't know who their husband is going to be or what he will do when he finds out. In "The Bridge" hubby fucked that guy so bad he lost his business. In my Original Version of February Sucks Marc LaValliere was kicked in the nuts by every member of an outlaw Motorcycle gang. Literotica wouldn't publish that. So I had to change it to 20 prospects of his gang But Fucked LaValliere and his four henchmen earning their Brown Wings. Then the whole club and their women all pissed on them. LOL So, remember You Never Know who you are messing with. It may come back to bite you. Thanks

Awesome. You are right. That BTB was not over the top. That shit really does happen. It happens in the dark and stays in the dark. Archer couldn't let it go even after he had a good idea of what Johnny was capable of. The end was seat of your pants satisfaction. I like all your stories but this one stands out. Thanks. 👍

Loved it, nicely written

Wickedly dark story, well written. Please continue writing.

Well done, I wasn't impressed with chapter 2 because the cross dressing does nothing for me.

Why his wife didn't immediately call Archer started to blackmail her is a major flaw. Either it's a flaw in her or the story, since it's fiction...let's say it's the wife flaw.

Thanks for the story five stars on 1&3 3 stars on 2.

Crazy. I get the nasty BTB vibe and the author wants Johnny to have total revenge on Archer. But why do all that to Grace? She was devastated by the rape. What is this "too convincing" crap. He saw her come home and she confessed. She didn't even know about the text. Wtf? They already got past hee flirtation and mistake on thr first chapter. Yeah she was dumb and being setup by a predator but she did not have sexual desire for Archer. Thr second chapter was a crazy diversion setting up the blackmail for this story. She went through with thr blackmail rape because she had no time to do anything and she lives her husband and knew those photos could wreck his reputation. Why not just leave her at the hotel? Why scare her? She was raped. Instead he wants her scared shirtless thr rest of their marriage. What a psychopath! She was raped. She helped set up Archer. Leave her out of the cloak and dagger crap. She won't go to thr police. Wtf?

The only thing better would be to just divorce his cheating wife

5*

I have not yet read the comments but I am guessing some of them will not be good. First and foremost the story really portrayed the predatory male very well. There are lots of them all around the world. Secondly I dread to think how many people are buried in concrete or under roads so the story is probably realistic in many ways. Much better writing and editing in this chapter even though you used the same editor as chapter 1. Thank you so much for your effort.

Quite a story. Some clumsy descriptions and dialogue, but nothing major. Givern Johnny's lposition and training,, his revenge on Archer was fitting. I was very worried he would kill Grace also, even though clearly she was trying to do the right thing. What a relief to see them both go home.

Fuuuck. I thought my stories were dark. I may have to step up my game. Incredible story. Thank you for sharing.

Your a meanie😉but keep on writing anyway.. You ain't wiped out all the cheaters yet;so get busy.. 🙄🤔😁👍we're waiting !!

A great story with substance, it does not have to be real it has to feel real and you have captured it!

Good for Archer. He deserved it.

I know the story is fiction, but I think Grace got off a little to easy. No one, marrying into a family like she did, could be dumb enough to put herself in a position like she did. Overall, a great stor

I thought it was great! I loved how you made Johnny physically small but manlier than most men. I thought Archer was going to get castrated, but this solution made more sense.

I loved it. Perfect ending. This is the way a cheater should be treated. Thanks.

HEY!!!!

solo aclarar que los colombianos no son tan malos... son mucho, mucho peores.

lo único bueno que tienen es su talento para la prostitución.... entre ellas y las dominicanas...WOW!!!

¡¡¡¡HEYY!!!!

just to clarify that Colombians are not that bad...they are much, much worse.

¡¡¡¡the only good thing they have is their talent for female prostitution.... between them and the Dominican girls...WOW!!!!

Wow, rollercoaster ride, even tho you could see the end, it was great. Thanks for the hour of entertainment.

Legend has it that the main runway at Kingsford-Smith Airport covers the odd body or three. Think of that the next time you fly into Sydney.

Five stars.

Really great story! Justice well served. Bit easy on the bitch, but we all have weak moments!

I have read a few of your stories now and find them a great read. Thank you for sharing your work with us.

I loved this story as I have all of the other that I have read, please continue to write great stories...........():\

She was a bit to stupid to have sympathyt for but all in all it was a good little BTB.

had me worried a little,thought he was going all in and doing her in too .

BTB at its best! 5 - Stars!

All predators should end like this one! Wife should have had to suffer also.

very good story, congratulations, you are a great writer.

Great story congrats ... love when a plan comes together!

Umm Grace was outright raped. Johnny's "too convincing" argument is hyperbolic nonsense. She was distraught and disgusted. She told him immediately what happened. And then he subjected her to the terro that she might too be killed. He gave Archer the blackmail kompromat by cross dressing and having fun with Grace. Yes Grace wa infatuated with Archer in the first chapter but was horrified when Archer revealed himself to be a monster. She submitted to the degrading rape (blackmail sex is rape) to save her husband and his reputation. She had no time and no way to weasel out of it. She then told her husband. Johnny's reaction to Archer is a solid btb to put down a predator. While I am not a murder fan, I can understand it. But his reaction to Archer's rape of Grace and his "too convincing" rationale, and the emotional terror he subjected her to, before "granting her clemency", that was completely over the top and disgusting. Sorry only 4 stars. Arcger got put down, but Johnny sadistically treated Grace like crap after the rape because apparently he really is insecure. Too bad she couldn't get out of the marriage after that. Her husband did her seriously wrong, enough to easily.merit divorce. This story went into very dark place.