All Comments on 'Love You So Much Aunt Betty'

But your grammar really put a damper on the eroticism.

.....bother to read this story after you finished it?

It's written like a child would speak, or someone much busier jackin off than paying attention to their work.

This is nothing but a mess of run on sentences. There really isn't much more to add to that.

Is English your first language? it takes the fun out of it when you have to try and figure out what the writer is trying to say?

I really liked the passion of your story. Sure, you could use a proof-reader to keep your grammar and run-on sentences under control, but all-in-all, you have a great sense of story-telling, and the site can use more great stories like yours.

Please keep up the fine work.

Regards

beetle

The story is good and communicates the emotion very well .I suspect however that your English was learned on the sub continent and you need an editor to smooth out one or two issues

Thanking you very much for commenting on my story...

Thanks even to those who intimidated my grammar and my style..I know I deserve it!!

Guys ... Hold on on a sec..

I am not a prof. writer and I am not pretending to be..

I only recorded real facts that happened to me and that still lives inside me..

I had a lot of other real stories on that same issue but I think there is no need to offer my real life memories in a way to let you be so much angry against me..

So....Forgive my poor grammar .. English is not my first language being a Mediterranean .. So please just take the good side of it which is the true and real human feelings and reactions.

Thanking you very much for commenting on my story...

Thanks even to those who intimidated my grammar and my style..I know I deserve it!!

Guys ... Hold on on a sec..

I am not a prof. writer and I am not pretending to be..

I only recorded real facts that happened to me and that still lives inside me..

I had a lot of other real stories on that same issue but I think there is no need to offer my real life memories in a way to let you be so much angry against me..

So....Forgive my poor grammar .. English is not my first language being a Mediterranean .. So please just take the good side of it which is the true and real human feelings and reactions.

If I want an analysis of grammar and sentence structure, I'll pick up an English Grammar book. I thought this story was highly erotic and fun to read, reminiscent of dreams you have when you're young and horny, the kind of story you hope to find on "Literotica". Thanks for writing such a great story. I didn't even notice the grammatical errors if there were any. 60 year old George

If sumthing like this would just happen to me ,my life wood be great.to know that she would can and did it just to u 4u because uru and she wanted 2