by erosdon
Possiby the dumbest line ever written on this website.What has wifey been doing for the last 12 chapters but making her husband a cuckold? Idiotic.Question.Why are all these Indian stories the same.Same plotline different names.Sad.This is not erotic.Actually borders on incest
Dear annony, you're an asshole queer
Like Irondork, cantbuyaclue, and the other insecure closet cucks bleating and squealing in the comments of other stories but too thin-skinned for negative comments or downvotes?
The bit where mother and daughter makeout and egg- on their common lover was really hot. However without an outlet for release at that moment, I feared that my lovely Manish might have ended up with blueballs.
I also feel Shyam has no right over Neeta's body now. The cuckolding happened when he accepted the young bull's apology in chapter 4. I think you should either bring Manish into Neeta's home or create another bull stud fir her.
BTW whatabout the lovely Sumitra?
Hope this story is not done, as it definitely one of the hottest stories I have read I a while! Really brings out the flavor of an Indian story while still appealing to a larger audience!
its been four months since your last submission. was wondering if you are going to finish your story?