by MilkChocolateAmazon
What can I say, I love recriminating introspection followed by a happy ending. Nicely written and excellent sex scenes. Thanks for introducing me to Alex and Seth.
Im so glad you decided to continue this series again. Like always very well written. Hot! detailed sex scenes between Seth and Alex. Maybe a little more back story about Damon, but as always good job. Think ive read all you stories at least twice, pls keep it up!!!!
There's more... *bounce* I'm so amazed with how your style and confidence has improved with each and every chapter of this story. Your feel for your two leads is really strong in this episode and the writing is excellent. I loved the scene in the club (and after) so very hot! *fans*
xx.S
but this chapter elevated it to FANTASTIC!! Please tell us there will be more?!?!
This is an amzingly well written story it is very well i will be honest i am at a loss for words i usually am VERY harsh and rude but with this i am completly satisfided it is AMAZING and captivating i wish you would continue it. . .BRAVO!!!!
Scincerly
Scilence
I loved this story! Please don't let this be the last installment.
i absolutely loved this story and sincerly hope that you write another chapter...i think it would really be hot for seth to get fucked...
SO GOOD! i'de say keep it up! hot steamy smexy lovey dovey <3333 great job!
That was wonderful, its always good to find people that make the romance and emotions the story and the sex an element. It was a good read. The only other thing I can say is .... More please.
Love Seth & Alex story. It's so romantic! Please write more!!
you could find another problem and solution story but if thats not what you want then ok. it was a fabulous hot and sweet story with a perfect ending:)
Please write more of Seth & Alex, I just love them!! They're just so sweet together!
This is like one of the sweetest best story I've ever read. I can't wait to read another one ^^
Is Seth the top and Alex the bottom bcuz technically Alex is still a virgin until he switches roles and breeds Seth but I could be wrong but you should continue the story I am enjoying it
i think this story should continue, its very catching i like it a-lot
they need to switch Seth needs to bottom, and it would be nice if there was a little more love in the love making once in awhile. it deepens the characters by showing their vulnerability to each other. also, good call on making Alex the aggressor. it was a nice hot twist.
Absolutely loved this story and your other story, do not understand no other other comments. You are a truly talented writer, your characters have depth and you explain their backgrounds, great storylines and a happy ever after which I'm a sucker for.
What confuses me is why you didn't continue writing more stories? I know life and stuff gets in the way of things but would love to have seen more of your writings.
This was a great test of their relationship in this chapter where Seth had to learn a huge lesson on trusting his bf. Wrapping the story up the way you did was great as well!
Just finished reading your series and it was beautiful. Hope to read more from you.