All Comments on 'Loving and Very Gently Erotic'

A good story without a point. No cause, no effect, no direction.

You have great ideas but they go nowhere!

Sweet and simple; a moment in time and a fleeting memory, many of which need no before or after.

My only regret is that it was too short.

Ah.the age of sexual exploration.Seems a little naive at age 18 but still gotta start sometime.

This was very powerful. Really well done!

I loved its sensuality, straight approach and what a subtle and delicious ending

I loved it! Very thought, or rather memory, provoking. The first time was intense.