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by SoCaliDude

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chytownchytownabout 3 years ago
Nice Story***

Thanks for the read.

racfguyracfguyabout 3 years ago

I read this after I removed all the commas. (101 commas in a 746 word story!) It was a much better read. Author, you use too many. Very distracting.

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Raised in L.A./Orange Counties. BA & AA degrees. Dodgers, Lakers, Rams fan. Divorced/teenage son.

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