All Comments on 'Loving Punishment'

2020 I’m tryna be on this level of toxic and sociopathic this is the relationship I’m manifesting

The only thing that squashes it is "I know". That just kills the entire mood. Geez.

The face slapping shouldn't happen either. That's abuse and needs to be ass spanking instead.

Cons:

1. Could definitely do with some additional editing.

2. Needs more elegant variation.

3. More detail would have been nice, especially in regards to the sex.

Pros:

1. Definitely left me wanting more!

2. Forget about what ShadowRose said. The slapping is hot and to those of us that are into that sort of thing. "That's abuse," as if the entire Daddy Dom dynamic isn't slandered as abusive by vanilla normies to start with, come on. Why is spanking inherently superior to this person on a moral level? Do you know what it is about spanking in a BDSM context that makes it not abuse? Is it, mayhaps, consent? 🙄

3. Although I donmaintain, as stated above, that hisncoule have benefited from more details, you did a good job at capturing the sort of fluttery fear/arousal cycle that drives a lot of bratty behavior!