All Comments on 'Loving Your Neighbor'

One and done cuckalicious.

Lame premise for a cuck story.

Timeline doesn’t match! 4 kids, assuming right out of college, student loans, no house, both working, we’re looking at starting 29. Even if they had all four in 4 years, we’re looking at 34 years old. Now all 4 are moved out? They’re in their 50’s.

This story will probably get angry comments from anonymous as usual but i want part 2 please. Story is really hot so far. I like that they're getting close together and she's not neglecting the husband either. It would be even hotter if she compared her 2 men and teases jack

No. Just no.

Yes, idiots are not dying out. This author and his story prove it!

The Titanic has spotted the iceberg. Rather than steering away from danger, the crew has decided to increase speed and head directly toward one of the few things in the world's oceans that poses a lethal threat to them. Aimee is already voicing emotional ties to Paul that are not compatible with her being married to Jack. Apparently more dissatisfied with their marriage than either cares to admit, they somehow determine the correct response to that danger sign is to increase dramatically the physical intimacies Aimee shares with Paul. What could possibly go wrong with that plan?

A good start. Looking forward for chapter 2

Enjoyable fantasy, which has all the elements to wind up the trolls - well done! It would be good to get rid of the typos - a few too many for me, and please stop the switches back to present tense. They just disturb the flow and don’t work as a literary device.