All Comments on 'Loyal Wife / Vengeful Ex'

FFS use a spell checker

and you might need some anger management. Not sure what you have against Sandra (Bullock?); but that much anger isn't good for you.

Please use spell checker. I stopped reading your story because of the typos.

spelling bad story good

If you don't care enough about your writing to freaking spell words correctly, I won't be interested in it enough to read it.

learn to fuckin' spell. what a turnoff - others take the time to present it. you typed like you were running from the cops

As always you put out damn quality story. I'm a fan and have been for a while (even if I don't always remember to read all your stuff) I gotta side with the nay sayers though that a trip through the spell checker wouldn't have hurt. Once you have "cock" spelled "cocj" and Word would have caught that.

Loved the ending, lol.

would love that to be done with me by all the enemies i made at school and finally have them put the gangbang vid on internet for the whole world to see what a dirty little slut i am.... when i first read this story, i read it a hundred times till now, i immediately went to local adult bookstore and sucked off the sleaziest guy i found just to feel nasty , aroused and disgusted.... i think he didnt believed his luck when i even swallowed his nasty jizz...

two words - Spell check, thr typos are terrible!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Spell check

Please have someone edit or spell check!!!

Story may have been worth more than two stars but the spelling was simply to bad to read it with any kind of flow.

Or tardive diskenesia, or Tourette's Syndrome? What is the cause of your consistent mangling of the English language? Get an editor!