All Comments on 'Lucifer's Angel'

A sweet story. The only thing I would recommend is to find someone to edit and fix any mistakes b/c they take away from a good story. Other than that I enjoyed it alot. Keep writing!

me gusto muchisimo mas me alucino, hermsosa, ana maria

That was such a sweet little story!

I agree with the first anonymous comment. What a pity the author thought so little of his/her readers that he/she couldn't be bothered to spellcheck or proofread his or her submission. And as for the grammar and punctuation, words fail me! This is the first submission from this author that I have tried to read - and will be the last.

The whole story was just so sweet! Although, I do wish that Sabrina could go back to meet Maggie sometime. I loved that Lucifer was so caring even though what he did was wrong.