by redwitch
They only incorrect thing:
Star is described as having honey-coloured eyes but then it says she has the exact same shade of eyes as her father. But Stark was described as having very light blue eyes...
To climb to the top, Lana has left nothing but death, destruction in her path of self-destruction and whoring. People like her are very dangerous.
Thank you so much for updating! I love that they are back together!!! I am really liking Devlin, maybe he can get a story to huh? LOL!!!
You write so that your stories play out like I am watching a movie! Very hot!! Keep em cummin'!
I'm so glad that you still keep up with this story, even though it took so long. Thanx for the submission! Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
Glad that Aries and Mimi are back together :) Can't wait for the next chapter!
I just found this story three days ago. I just completed reading a few minutes ago. I absolutely loved it. The characters Jack/Aries and Mimi are wonderful. Great story.
WCD
Totally worth the wait. I can honestly say, take your time. But not too much time, hear? ;-)
I have been waiting for you to continue. I love your writing. Hope the next installment is coming really soon.
seems like i've been waitin on this chapter forever lol i started reading it seems like a year ago..from my cell phone no less. can't wait for the next installment..sooo hurry up :)
you are one of my favorite authors! story just keeps getting better. i love it.