Lucky Man Ch. 12

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Mentalcase
Mentalcase
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"I figured that they could set them as your contact photo, so they'd know what your wife did when you spoke to them. They'd know where they could go to get a blowjob, when they needed one. Wasn't that nasty of me baby?"

"God you are turning me on," he groaned, sliding deeply into Kara, who moaned in response.

His cock bottomed out in the gorgeous redhead, her legs wrapping around him as he pushed into her. His cock spread her drenched pussy and plunged deeply in, her juices lubricating and coating it as it intruded.

"After that, Derrek made me get on the bed and finally got to fuck me. He took me me from behind while Drake came around and made me suck on his cock again. They really took advantage of you not being there," she said.

Duncan kissed Kara deeply then, his cock never slowing as she began to cum, her voice a quiet moan, punctuated by yelps every few seconds.

"Derrek came on my back, and then again in Molly's pussy, but I let Drake cum right in my pussy, baby," she said playfully.

Duncan groaned, fucking downwards into Kara's cunt, his cock pistoning powerfully into her as she yelped. Finally, his orgasm crested and he cried out in pleasure.

"Fuck," Kelly moaned into the phone, cumming on her end.

Great spurts of cum erupted from the end of his cock, firing into Kara's convulsing pussy and renewing her own orgasm. All three of them moaned, yelped, sighed, and cried out in pleasure for a while, before finally falling silent.

Kelly spoke first. "The next morning, I woke Drake up with a blowjob, and jerked him off on his chest."

Duncan grinned and picked up the phone. "I love you baby," he said, smiling, and pulling Kara to him.

"I love you," Kelly answered. "I can't wait to see you. No regrets?"

"No regrets," he answered. "I'm so happy you had fun last night. I was afraid that you wouldn't be able to follow through with it all."

"Well," Kelly said. "I had a lot of trepidation, honestly. It all worked out in the end though. I really had fun. I don't want you to think that I'm going to be doing that all the time though. I'm still serious about just blowjobs for awhile. I think I'm only going to have sex with other men on very special occasions."

"I'm fine with however you want to approach it," he said. They spoke for a few more minutes, and Duncan told her about all of his sexual escapades. A few dozen I love you's later and they finally said goodbye. Kara was snoring quietly next to him, and he spooned up to her. She moaned and turned, leaning into his chest.

"Love you too," she murmured.

He chuckled and brushed a hair aside, kissing her forehead and watching as she fell silent again.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Ridiculously hot

While obviously fantasy, it is not jarringly so.

The way Kelly ruminates on the differences between cocks, orgasms and sex in general is very hot. She is the star of the story and I do hope to see more of her in coming chapters :)

J

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Any news on a new installment?

How much longer before Ch.13

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Query

Kelly now likes to give blowjobs and lot of other things...but still does not swallow? Just seems off, when most of the other women in the story do,

MentalcaseMentalcaseover 6 years agoAuthor
Much Appreciation!

I agree with the above two comments to an extent. I was torn writing this chapter as it features Kara so much and Kelly only a bit. I amp up the action in the next chapter, or the one after for Kelly. I can't remember which at the moment.

Kelly takes it slow as she's supposed to be the shy one. I know that's a little ridiculous at this point, but for my money, there always has to be little hurdles that they need to overcome for this particular story to have meaning and be interesting. There's no real conflict going on, so the story centers around these little milestones. I honestly didn't really want Kelly to swap yet, and I wanted to focus on just oral sex for them, but I screwed up that plan when I had Duncan with another woman so soon.

My original plan was for the both of them to start much slower, soft swap, oral sex only, and then after a few chapters, swap completely, but still keep it slow.

My fears with that plan were losing my reader base because I was taking too long with the action. It's struck a nice balance, I think, however, and I'm pleased with how it's turning out.

In Chapter 13, Kelly has a scene with someone she hasn't fool around with before. It only a little naughty, but I think you guys will like it.

Chapter 14 features Kelly more heavily, and I've really just focused the majority of what I've written on her. I think you guys will like it.

I appreciate all of the comments, and I love that you guys like my story. Thanks!

-M

check out my profile for a link to my tumblr. I posted a picture of what inspired one of Kelly's naughty outfits if that piques your interest.

jshsalvjshsalvover 6 years ago
Agree with Anon.

Love this story, but not the direction you headed in this chapter. This is just my own personal feelings however, and it in no way distracts from your writing abilities. I just felt the story took something away from Kelly and Duncan by expanding more on Kara's position and less with Kelly deferring to blow jobs. It loses something in this transition for me. I enjoy the closeness they share in their interactions with the entire group, and not in just so much about Kara.

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