All Comments on 'Lucy Propositions Don Ch. 01'

And mouth watering thinking of Bev and Lucy with Mar and Don

keep it cumming lol

Atlanta,Ga

Adultery.

As a stroke story I guess it has value--though I keep thinking of STD's.

This story should be in the group category and not in Loving Wife - then you'll probably get a higher rating.

Do us all a favor and retire from writing.

Why silly you ask?<P>

He's OK with her whoring around whenever she wants, but she's upset when he can at long if ever finally get some strange cunt - so he [wimpus non-erectus] cancels - huh!!!<P>

Silly him to respect her feelings when she didn't give a shit about him while she was out fucking around with her regular studs and who knows else.<P>

Whats really confusing is she acted normally, whereas he didn't have a normal bone in his wimp body. UKidus I'm sure and so embarrassing.<P>

How sweet - such a normal loving UK family.

No worse slut than a married jealous selfish slut; and no worse cuck than one who puts up with her.

Harry,

I've got to tell you- this is some really fantastic writing my friend!

A great story that keeps you anxiously grasping ahead for the next sentence, and yet not wanting the story to come to an end.

Keep up the fantastic work, and remember- the more railings and complaints you get, only support how great a writer you really are! They can't compete, so their only option is that of most politicians, and that is to just criticize their opposition rather than put up something of value themselves.

Keep up the wonderful work my friend.

Nesher

Story about a couple of old whores trying to be cute. Failed miserably.