All Comments on 'Lucy Stays'

First story!

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A repost after ment years is still depressing but well written

This was very well written and very different. Not my cup of tea, but 5 stars for a well done piece.

I liked it well enough twenty plus years ago to archive it, and still do. I saw the title this morning and clicked on it to see whether some outright plagiarism had been practiced, and was pleased to see the true author's reappearance if only briefly.

I have one other story of his in my archives: Cannon Song - another true classic. I am looking forward to reading other of his stories that I missed when they first appeared.

5* Strange but gripping. I can feel the tension you build - even though we know roughly where it's going (it's an LW story, after all). It could, though, almost go in mind control the way that Wade, a Svengali character, affects everyone involved. Thank you for posting it.

I can't see it turning out well for Fergus and Lucy . . .

Imaginative premise and well told. I’m looking forward to more from the author.

Really want to read part 2!

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It’s a fantastic erotic story, thank you for posting it. As for the ‘haters’ who seem to get off by posting on Literotica, at least it keeps them off the streets for a while.

Use some tags. You will lose most of your readers but the people who want to read this type of thing won't crucify you and save you the time of having to delete almost all the comments.

Well written, 5 stars and a content smile knowing you’re deleting the one-star coward troll comments too!

Cheers.

Oh - I loved it. I could truly imagine myself as Lucy. The temptation, the arousal, the totally new experience. And...an understanding loving husband. Yes...I loved it.

Could it be that people like this "tennesseered" have learned too much from Trump. Censorship is exactly what the idiots have on their flags. The world is so colorful when everything that bothers you is no longer noticed, isn't it? My goodness what advice some idiots give!