All Comments on 'Lucy Submits to a Spanking'

Lovely story and very nicely written.

Excellent : Waiting for more. This young lady craves for some more humilating spanking and exposure.

Tightly written with just the right amount of sparse dialogue. I thought Master Kane broke character by using the phrase, "...cool your jets". It seemed a little too flip considering the formal nature of the appointment. And I believe it is Mart Stam, not Starm. 5.

Great start. An asexual erotic spanking. Hints of more to come. Please.

One of the best pieces of writing I've read here in a long time!

This site has sadly gone downhill of late with many 'authors' being too lazy to even check spelling and grammar and instead simply race through the random thoughts to gratification as soon as possible.

Fortunately, there are still authors, real authors, out there who appreciate how to tell a story and how to bring a scene to life in the mind of the reader.

I loved this tale. It had style. It made sense. It was well written and (almost :)) error free.

Well done! Keep writing.

A perfect example of ‘be careful what you wish for’. An exceptional piece of writing eminently believable and realistic. The soap in the mouth was an exercise in humiliation, it rounded everything off. I’ll happily say it’s something I’ve never experienced nor do I want to I suspect the reality is a disturbing harsh let down on the concept. After all there’s nothing erotic about actually having soap in your mouth, not when your own imagination can taunt you so much better.

Thoroughly enjoyed this vignette, I’m sure she got exactly what she wanted well aside from being filled, it’s that permission to let go.

Thank you so much for sharing your writing, it’s definitely appreciated.

Tess (UK)

Thanks for the constructive feedback.

Excellent and realistic throughout, though not sure I would pay that much!

I know - London prices!

Althoug Lucy and I would have liked a much more erotic end. Haha

Well written and very erotic

I really enjoyed the way you built the tension. Lucy's inner monolgue was very believable and the whole set up felt real, as though a friend had visited and was sharing the experience with me. I loved the way you kept Master Kane professional throughout, not succumbing to the offer of sex at the end, which would have been titillating, but would have just made it a fantasy. Adding the element of humiliation and the bonus cane strokes really was the icing on the cake! I look forward to reading more of your work in future.

Well done, a believable story of corporal punishment paid for by the recipient à

I am somewhat of a male equivalent of Lucy. I felt it all with her. She will go back soon, she needs more. But will she be able to open up to her boyfriend and tell him.her needs?

Love it!

Love it, a proper spanking