All Comments on 'Lucy takes Advantage'

So you mean your fat friend actually left you in the night of his wife's ovulating period and you got her pregnant? I don't think there are such people...sorry i don't believe you

Hot story but it’s incredibly distracting as a woman to read bad women’s anatomy. Hitting the cervix is not a good feeling. Sperm traveling up the Fallopian tubes and fertilizing an egg is incredibly rare and also life threatening (it’s called ectopic pregnancy and it can kill you).

I'm going to address the other 2 comments

Comment 1: some women enjoy their cervix being hit during piv. It's ok if you don't, but some women do.

Comment 2: the author prefaced the story by saying this didn't happen. Do you understand what fiction is?

My input:

I enjoying how real the actual sex was for a fiction story. The author didn't get all crazy with the porno type scenes of doing a ton of different positions. This felt like it could really happen because of how short the story was with the actual sex. The sex wasn't glorified and I really enjoyed being in the mind of the hung man. Great writing on that part!