All Comments on 'Lucy's Big Adventure'

Not enough back story, but still good

Not sleeping with her husband but with him; the passionate kisses, and their intimate conversation spells trouble.

what a narcissistic lifestyle. It's only about me me me and what the individual needs with a sprinkling of "but you are the love of my life and I only want to grow old with you" translated, I need the financial and emotional security of a weak man that allows me to be a whore for others and I'll give him the crumbs he so craves.

So far from any semblance of reality it might as well be a Disney movie.

So, that was Lucy's big adventure. When does the cuckold husband get HIS big adventure? You know, with some "hot" woman. Only being an average, non-descript guy, they will have to pay some type of escort but it seems to be the only way HE gets to have the same experience.

It's always good to watch a wife enjoy a new lover.

All of the intimacy between Lucy and Chris is a red flag. If it's only about sex with different men then what's with the kissing and pillow time between Lucy and Chris in the other bed? Lucy giving so much to Chris that she denied her husband Michael a last round of sex before falling asleep in Chris's arms? What with Lucy rubbing Chris's hand while speaking intimately with him at the table? Them, together, having "pillow talk" as Michael observed. What with Lucy immediately requesting another date with Chris? They haven't even left the hotel room!

There are certain behaviors that form emotional bonds between men and women. These bonds are what forms relationships. The type of relationships that make up mating pairs, husbands and wives. Lucy is quickly forming a mating relationship with Chris. This story is ultimately about a couple committing marital suicide. That's counted as a win for people.

Lacking creativity and imagination and the fact that you have a thing for swinging makes me feel like you would be fantastic in the group category. You write like you want to prove how good you are and don’t get me wrong you are good but it feels like a rushed story. Not enough information as someone has pointed out which is correct but you show extremely good talent in the group category which you definitely should proceed with and you might want to add some impregnated stories in your future work you might notice a big difference ok . But please don’t feel bad about your work it’s just the fact that you would be excellent with your work in the group category writing about Swinging etc ok .

Good pacing, I gave it 5*. Please write more.

Loved the story had me playing with my pussy my husband loves watching me made love to he even picks my play mates

I like a good swinging story no dp?

So erotic to watch and encourage a hotwife to try a new lover

You validated your man card by taking her during the tryst, but then you give it back in some misguided notion of chivalry when she denies you by saying she couldnt fuck anymore that night. Just take her, that is what they are there for, she may say she cant but all she has to do is lie there while you take your pleasure. Come on man.

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