All Comments on 'Lucy's Party Ch. 01'

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sandymonroesandymonroeover 10 years ago

It was hot as hell. You could have used some more dialogs, tough.

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Writing has slowed somewhat due to other 'life' matters. I am pleased that others continue to enjoy my stories. If you want professional quality writing, perhaps you ought to find a site where you can pay for that. I tend to ignore critiques or 'helpful suggestions' from 'ano...

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