by Kimmi_kis
lets see more chapters and Hannah needs to confront her family and tell them that she needs to be with Luke and someone that loves her as a person and not as a Maid and someone to look after her dad when he can take care of himself and the brothers need to look after themselves and there dad.
Atlanta,Ga
geeze finally that hard head luke comes to his sense's!! i just hope that hanna doesn't reject him!!! GREAT story!!!
The story flows now and you've set the right pace. I will be looking for an update soon.
I really enjoy reading this story and hope it lasts for quite a while. You are doing great and I am really caring for the family and what happens to them.
cant wait for the next chapter. im sitting on pins and needles waiting for it. please post again soon!!!
I can't wait to read more! Please don't take too long to submit the next chapter.
Please continue writing!! I want to know whats going to happen I have kept checking on this story since March!!
Boy, the tension is mounting. Must know more about why Hannah is running away from her brothers and father.
why do you all do this? start a great story and then dont finish it. it really makes me MAD. are you gonna finish or you just gonna leave it with no ending?
pleeeeeease continue writing, I've been waiting FOREVER for the next chapter, it's just so good! I'd watch the way you use your tense though, but other than that, it's great! Just submit the next chapter already, okay?
Kimmi_Kis - this is just about the best story I've read on Litterotica - PLEASE KEEP WRITING !!
I don't care about spelling errors, past/present tense etc. - it is just a lovely story.
You MUST clear up why she's running from her family - why she's so hesitant to Luke - please bring it to a romantic finish. - I can't wait for the next chapter.
Again, KEEP WRITING - you are VERY good !!! - Thank you.
Kimmi_Kis - this is just about the best story I've read on Litterotica - PLEASE KEEP WRITING !!
I don't care about spelling errors, past/present tense etc. - it is just a lovely story.
You MUST clear up why she's running from her family - why she's so hesitant to Luke - please bring it to a romantic finish. - I can't wait for the next chapter.
Again, KEEP WRITING - you are VERY good !!! - Thank you.
Love these stories. Are you going to finish it?
I enjoyed reading this entire story. You have great writing skills. Please finish this story.
I can easily see nearly a dozen more chapters, at least.
There's SO much potential for this story, and I LOVE it.
I can hardly wait for when you continue it. <3
So we've finally reached the romance. The previous chapters were making Luke look more like a sexual predator. Too bad the author looks to have abandoned this story, it was just starting to get good.
You had 6 chapters to a great story!!! Then no more. Did she stay with them?
I seriously need more! Like, right now!!!!!! I'm literally shaking I'm so excited and nervous
NOT. No way he or she could flip like that. Not in mine or anybody else's dreams. The characters just are not believable.