All Comments on 'Luke's Big Butt Changes Ch. 04'

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Xmale06Xmale06almost 2 years ago

Was this "fight" absolutely necessary? I just hope they'll reconnect very soon....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I'd been waiting for the sequel... why stop it like that?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Please update soon! Love this story! Sammy and Luke need a hot reunion.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Glad to see another part ! Hoping they came come back together.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great story, please don't rush the next chapter to keep the quality as high as it is now

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Just read all four chapters and wanted to give you my praise - amazingly hot premise. There's something insanely got about how casual Luke is about fingering his hole and getting rammed by Sammy. Really good stuff!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Luke’s cluelessness turned into irrational homophobia which hurt Sammy deeply and fractured their long friendship/bromance. I realize Luke has been irrationally unaware that what he and Sammy have been up to was gay sex, but come on - once Sammy points it out and is brave enough to express his honest feelings, why is Luke still so dense and full of denial. Hated that part so much. Pls bring Luke and Sammy back together. And please don’t make Luke so desperate to soothe his “itch” that he turns to the other guys and breaks Sammy even more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I love this sequel so much!!! I am glad to see that there’s a part 4!! I thought I would be satisfied for a while but with that endinggg, I need a pt 5 asap!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Awesome read!! Please continue writing! I loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I CANT WAIT!

DevonCowboyDevonCowboyalmost 2 years ago

Excellent story, and the best part of a fight is the making up afterwards. It'll torment Luke & Sammy, and it'll be awkward and unforgiving but ultimately it'll be the making up of all making ups. Looking forward to it

curiousaudreycuriousaudreyalmost 2 years ago

They're about to take turns with him cuz he doesn't ha e Sammy protecting him anymore chile

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Bravo: 5.0 = 💯% (🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟), ❤!

Way above my expectations.

This story is very erotic and resonably realistic. On top of that it is romantic too.

In this story, I identified with Luke.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Excerpt from p. 1 of Ch. 4.

Quote:

"Sammy, you don't mean that, I'm sorry for what I said... we're still best buds, right?"

"I can't go back to being just friends, Luke. I'm sorry. I think we shouldn't see each other for a while."

For some reason, my eyes got all hot and prickly. My stomach was sinking. Sammy didn't want to see me anymore, meaning we aren't bros.

End quote.

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