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Anonymousover 10 years agoNice job. I enjoyed your story.
You switched a bit between first and third person and past and present tense, which I found to be distracting. Something to watch out for. But overall, nice job.
Sexslave01over 10 years agoAuthorUpdate
Okay part two will be up in a day or two. I messed up the submission form and accidentally deleted all of it so i will write it back up and post it asap
Anonymousabout 10 years agoLong weekend..?
I'm sorta lost... how is it the weekend if the previous date was Monday..?
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