Luna vs. The Camp Ch. 04

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Once we were sure he was gone, the mood eased up a little, everyone was a bit tense about having a boy share not only their secret, but their fun to that extent, and Rebecca was about ready to call it quits:

"Can I get dressed now?" She asked the rest of us.

"I think we can let her off the hook, what do you girls think?" I asked Jackie and Kaylee, who relented and allowed the poor redhead to get dressed and end her bet successfully.

"How about you, Luna, you can get dressed too." Kaylee, taking pity on me just a touch after this very eventful day, offered me a chance to restore my modesty.

"I'd take that offer, but there's just one problem," I told them, grinning impishly.

"Oh? And what's that?" Jackie asked, apparently realizing where this was going.

"I think I'm still a bit too worked after the last bit." I coyly danced around my objective, but Jackie kindly gave me the go-ahead:

"Well, it can't be helped, I guess." Still near the edge of the pond, Jackie grabbed her own phone and started recording, she definitely knew how to make things better "start rubbing, Luna."

And I obliged, masturbating for the girls once more.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Eh I happen to like how this is more having fun with friends than humiliation with “friends”, but to each their own

Cream_CaramelCream_Caramelover 4 years agoAuthor

Nah, don't worry about it, constructive criticism like this is always welcome, but yeah, this is less humiliation and more "people having fun", but I always do come back to humiliation because there's always a need to escalate things, and I tend to agonize over where to go if I don't pace myself.

But I get that the problem is that I can't put out as many stories as I used to anymore and so tamer stories seem a bit unimpactful.

I'll have to consider how to roll out my stories in the future for that same reason.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Decent, not your best. Rebecca was fun, likely due to having some shyness. Luna is probably my favorite of your MC's, but the camp series doesn't really have much humiliation, which in the past has been one of your bigger kinks (similar opinion about the bimbo series, which is also tame humiliation wise). Personally I think the ones that have both exhibition and humiliation tend to be your better work, but definitely write what you want to write, don't listen too much to us idiots on the internet.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Happy to see you writing again. Still hoping for more Young, Dumb and full of cum.

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