All Comments on 'Lunch Date'

by floorman9169

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AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Interesting premise.

But sex happens way too fast. Way too automatically. Lacks foreplay.

And it's over much too quickly.

And you wrote: " The doors slid open and he lead her into the elevator." You meant LED, not LEAD,

Three stars.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

I was thinking the same thing as anon

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