All Comments on 'Lunch Sex'

by Poeticwolf

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LovingErinLovingErinover 1 year ago

Damn. Just.... damn! Best shower scene ever! This was an absolute joy to read. The sex scenes were hot, I loved how you showed her knowing him so well, all his nuances, the sentence "His dick is responding to you and no one else" and the description of the ejaculation in her mouth.... very alluring. I don't get a thrill from "almost getting caught stories" but I recognize talent when I see it and this was very steamy and well written. It’s lovely to stumble upon a writer here who is legitimately skilled at the erotica craft. Please keep sharing your stories with us!

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