All Comments on 'Lust and Love at the Lake House Ch. 05'

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Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcover 2 years ago

Somewhere in all the sex you lost the real story. You started to give us glimpses toward the end of this chapter, but then reverted to sex again. So much sex in one day that you have officially "left orbit" on reality or something I can get my arms around. 3*

cybercrittercybercritterover 2 years ago

Love this story. Keep it going!!!

gt973gt973over 2 years ago

This story started out so good but the last 2 chapters it turned into shit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Beautifully paced. But why is Jack so afraid of falling in love with Jenny? She is all that any man could wish for him.and has clearly fallen very hard for him.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

What a hot sexy Chapter damn Jenny would be a dream come true for any guy and maybe a real hot lover for a sexy gal. Keep writing as you've really hit on some great subjects.

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